tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post1892391764096401482..comments2008-05-15T11:09:09.926-04:00Mr. McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02922744477241266679noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-32549378783871070222008-05-15T11:09:00.000-04:002008-05-15T11:09:00.000-04:00I like this assignment, because I get to work with a friend and I still have to think. Dakota Bond is a good partner while Luke O just fooled around.Tommy Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-78523599605148988342008-05-12T10:35:00.000-04:002008-05-12T10:35:00.000-04:00Me and my partner called our story "Problem After Problem" because that is mainly what goes on in our story! There is one problem after the next. We are already on page two! I think our story is going to be good!jennie bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-63169751808901038802008-05-11T12:05:00.000-04:002008-05-11T12:05:00.000-04:00Em,<BR/><BR/>Well, we must work on that. If your story doesn't have problems in it, how can it be scary? <BR/><BR/>1st problem: You walk down a dark hallway, and you start to feel nervous.<BR/><BR/>2nd problem: You hear a noise at the end of the hallway, you stop, but you can't see anything.<BR/><BR/>3rd problem: There is a loud crash behind you.<BR/><BR/>4th problem: You hear a scream, and someone comes running at you.<BR/><BR/>5th problem: ??????<BR/><BR/>See me and we will talk about your story, but I am sure you have problems in it already. The key is just to develop them.Mr. McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02922744477241266679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-79049661952112360072008-05-11T00:07:00.000-04:002008-05-11T00:07:00.000-04:00I don't really get how to put a bunch of problems in my story. I also I don't understand how to do that and make it sound right.emily s ( em n em )noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-73424942803818994302008-05-10T14:24:00.000-04:002008-05-10T14:24:00.000-04:00Mr.McGuire under Classroom Activities you didn't put a space in between their and scary.katie wnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-84983541741934720772008-05-09T14:53:00.000-04:002008-05-09T14:53:00.000-04:00Hopefully your story will be just as problem filled!Mr. McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02922744477241266679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-65916143195819890992008-05-09T14:51:00.000-04:002008-05-09T14:51:00.000-04:00I really like this what we are doing!! I'm really good at making up scary story's hehe!! lol i love Halloween so most of my story's are on Halloween night. When my and my friends get together we always tell ghost story's!LOL!!!!! <BR/><BR/>But the story's that me and cat is writing about is on Halloween night after a party ! Well I don't what to tell you to much but I tell you the big details is that there is a group of friends that are teenagers trapped in a clowns house and there can't get out!! That all i can say lol.<BR/><BR/>But when I done you can read it and i hope that you like me story's!!!!!Bree G.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6684639278116003661.post-11494582556342583972008-05-09T14:30:00.000-04:002008-05-09T14:30:00.000-04:00My book Twilight is problem after problem after problem. It makes me want to keep reading. I feel like I'm in the story. I think that the more problems, the more interesting.Molly VanCurennoreply@blogger.com