This essay also counted for a grade in language arts. Justin did a great job with his introduction and conclusion.
This introduction outlines basic W's.
I discovered a lot about of interesting things about Mesopotamia. Mesopotamia was located in the fertile crescent that is now present day Iraq, Iran, Kuwait, Lebanon, Syrian, Jordan, Israel and Syria. Mesopotamia started in 4000 B.C. Mesopotamia was also located by two rivers, the Tigris and Euphrates.
The closing does a good job of wrapping up the essay and summarizing important information.
Mesopotamia was a very successful culture. In Mesopotamia they had laws, a form of writing and technology. The people of Mesopotamia still affect us today.
With a good opening and closing, the essay makes it easier for the reader to understand.