Sunday, January 10, 2010

What a Teacher Hopes for from a Student Blogger

Hadley has written 45 posts since September 17.  Most students in Reading Workshop write one or two posts a week.  Hadley has averaged four posts a week.  She writes cleanly and in an engaging style that tells a great story, and sparks many questions.

That's not the only thing that sets her apart.  She gets what matters.  Her posts share her thoughts, ideas, and opinions.  Posts often make the reader laugh and lots of times makes them smile. Her writing style draws in the reader. She posts regularly, writing in the evening after school, on weekends, and snow days.  She reads many of her peer's blogs, and comments on them.



Here is an excerpt from the post A Gray/Brown/Non-white Christmas
 Q :I hate it! I hate it, I hate it, I hate it! What do I hate?
A: THERE IS NO SNOW ON THE GROUND!!!! :(
I don’t get it. Do the snow Gods hate me? Was Elvis trying  to tell me something? I don’t know! I do know one thing, though; I WANT SNOW!

Another example from Team Laurelville
In the classroom, there are lots of places for good sportsmanship. Like when your worst enemy gets mentioned because he/she does a good deed, makes a great blog post, or when they get their named mentioned on The Reading Workshop, you should say “Great” or “I like the post” or something like that since they did a good job. Maybe since you did that to them, when you do something you’re proud of, they might treat you the same. The Golden Rule can work with more than just adult life!!


For a great read, and an excellent example of what a student blog should look like, just visit Hadley's Planet.

3 comments:

Hannah C said...

I totally agree with you Mr. McGuire. I get on Hadley's blog almost every day and reading her posts makes me laugh. If it's really good, I will even tell my mom to come and read it. I am very dissapointed when she hasn't written a new post in two days, just because I can't wait to read more from her blog. GREAT job Hadley!!!

Hadley P. said...

Thank you!!!

Mrs. Tenkely said...

What a great example of engaged student blogging! Well done Hadley.